you can come over here it's neither hot nor dry and we have power (at the moment)
I'm so glad that the aftermath of Rodney's near-drowning wasn't written as 'give him a bit of oxygen and he'll be fine.' The details were disgustingly realistic. I loved it!
I amped up the details. L (my beta) rightly called on some of them and I cut some down a hair. But in Carson's POV you can be a little OTT. And it is snotty! A chest infection can be a snotty experience -- so drowning would be snottier. I did wonder if it had gone a little overboard -- but I figure it's for the kid in all of us. Green Crusty SNOT.
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I'm so glad that the aftermath of Rodney's near-drowning wasn't written as 'give him a bit of oxygen and he'll be fine.' The details were disgustingly realistic. I loved it!
I amped up the details. L (my beta) rightly called on some of them and I cut some down a hair. But in Carson's POV you can be a little OTT. And it is snotty! A chest infection can be a snotty experience -- so drowning would be snottier. I did wonder if it had gone a little overboard -- but I figure it's for the kid in all of us. Green Crusty SNOT.
Yours Snottily,
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